Feedback

After sharing my magazine to the class, I received very positive feedback.  My background photo for my cover page got very many compliments, such as the low angle and the filter I had used. My table of contents also received good feedback.  Some people commented that they liked the way my article names wrapped around the picture of the dog, along the sides of the page.  The mid-angle of the picture worked well with the low angle picture on the previous page.  Next, my article had some white space, so I will write more to fill up a maximum amount of the page. Also, on each page of my article I have a high-angle picture centered on the page.  To add some variety, I would like to incorporate different angles and put the pictures in a different spot.  One suggestion that I got was to use a main photo to take up about a quarter of the page.  This would help cover some white-space and also add a visual element that would draw the reader's attention.  Also, I will add page numbers and my name under the article's title.